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Feb 05, 2013 Rating The day I traded my brother for apple sauce NEW by: Ryan My name is jimmy I am a boy from Ontario Canada one thing about me that gets me into really tricky situations is I love apple sauce. I am going to tell about the time when I traded my brother for apple sauce I was walking down the street and I saw this boy eating some applesauce. I kept watching watching him and he was trying to taunt me or something by eating it in slow motion. So I walked up to him and asked if had an extra and he said maybe I do maybe I don't. That boy was asking for a punch but I stayed calm and said why don't we make a trade. The boy said what for. To be honest I didn't no either but then a thought came to me then I said I have I brother. He said what could I do with your brother. Well anything you want I said them one of his eyebrows raised then in an excited scream he said yes. I went home and in the sneakiest of ways I said to him want a candy bar. My brother said mmmhmm well that guy has him which he said. The one with the applesauce my brother ran over to him to him but before he could say anything The boy with the apple sauce hit him in the head with a baseball bat and dragged him Into his house. In my head I thought seems legit so I walked away. By that time my mother was calling me for dinner when I got to the dinner table she said wears your brother I was about to tell her but then we heard are door bell ring so I ran to the door and say the boy with the applesauce and his mother standing there. My brother was there to and there mother said I believe he is yours. My brother walked in the house and whispered In my ear I'm telling mom and walked away.when I was about to close the door the boy with apple sauce said to me deals off I want my applesauce back. Then really fast I said to bad I ate it and closed the door. Apple sauce boy ran home crying and he moved away to Iceland. I got grounded for a month but to this day I still think it was worth it.

Feb 01, 2013 Rating The future author NEW by: Anonymous Hi I'm a 13 year old who lives in providence rhode island female and I love writing I can write sic fi fiction non fiction romance mystery nerdy and theropudic stories and and am looking for a job in writing short stories for a paper or web site and I also give great advice to cause I also solve problems so please give me a job

Jan 13, 2013 Rating hi NEW by: Anonymous hi, i am a 14year-old female love fiction have alot of ideas and love typing

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